Really quite a cutesy style, his expression is a bit odd though ^^" I must say, that moustache-balloon is amazing.
Thanks! Yeah, his expression is odd. I'll try better next time. :D
The face proportions aren't the greatest, the nose and mouth have to be pulled a bit closer together and the eyebrows are unrealisticly thick and finally the hair shading is very unrealistic--- even if you are going cartoonish light wouldn't affect the hair that way. On the subject of hair, I highly doubt that it would flow that way.
well, I'm still working to improve my skills, but it's ok for me to have some critics sometimes, as long as they're constructive :)
thanks for your feedback! I'll work on the proportions and the rest!
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